How do you make a technical product legible without oversimplifying it?

COMPANY

Oracle

ROLE

UX Strategist/PMM/UX Writer

Main ProblemS

Information Architecture/UX Writing

YEAR

2022

+40%

STORY ENGAGEMENT

STORY ENGAGEMENT

+35%

FASTER PROOF DISCOVERY

FASTER PROOF DISCOVERY

+25%

CTA CLICK LIFT

CTA CLICK LIFT

The Problem

Blockchain is genuinely hard to understand. Oracle's landing page was making it harder.


The Oracle Blockchain landing page was written for people who already understood the technology. Dense, feature-first copy assumed a level of familiarity that most enterprise buyers simply didn't have. Non-technical decision-makers faced a wall of terminology before they'd been given a single reason to care.


At the same time, technical users who did understand blockchain found the page unhelpfully vague on the specifics they needed. The page was somehow too complex for buyers and too simple for engineers, serving neither audience well.



Feature-first, proof buried — legible to no one in particular

The Goals

Three constraints that shaped every decision.

01

Serves two audiences

simultaneously

Serves two audiences simultaneously

Serves two audiences simultaneously

Non-technical buyers needed context and relevance first. Technical users needed depth and specificity. The same page had to meet both without asking either to work for it.

Non-technical buyers needed context and relevance first. Technical users needed depth and specificity. The same page had to meet both without asking either to work for it.

02

Surface proof at the moment of evaluation

Surface proof at the moment of evaluation

Customer validation needed to arrive before skepticism hardened. Not buried mid-scroll after the question had already formed and gone unanswered.

Customer validation needed to arrive before skepticism hardened. Not buried mid-scroll after the question had already formed and gone unanswered.

03

Make industry relevance immediately visible

Make industry relevance immediately visible

Buyers needed to find themselves in the page within seconds. Generic use cases weren't working. Industry-organized content was the condition for trust.

Buyers needed to find themselves in the page within seconds. Generic use cases weren't working. Industry-organized content was the condition for trust.

WHO I WAS DESIGNING FOR

Two distinct people. One page. Different needs at every scroll depth.


The research surfaced two audiences whose needs were almost opposed — and who both needed to feel like the page was built for them. The design couldn't optimize for one without actively considering the other.



Ethan Carter

Ethan Carter

CTO

"Before I put this in front of the board, I need to know it can handle what we're actually building."

Fear

Making a recommendation his team can't execute and his CFO won't approve.

What Stops Them

A page that makes him feel like he doesn't understand the technology well enough to evaluate it.

What They Need

One immediate reason that tells him blockchain is relevant to his business

What Success Feels Like

Confident enough to forward the page to his technical team with a clear recommendation.

WHAT I NOTICED

The page had an audience problem disguised as a content problem.

Research with internal teams and a cohort of existing customers revealed that people were interested in the product — they just couldn't navigate to why it mattered. The cognitive load wasn't from having too much information.


It was from having the wrong information in the wrong order for the wrong reader.


Legibility isn't about making things simpler. It's about making the right things visible to the right person at the right moment.



KEY INSIGHT

Non-technical buyers needed to understand blockchain's value within their industry before they could evaluate any feature. Industry-first organization wasn't a UX nicety — it was the condition for clarity.

The Structural Shift


The reframe: don't simplify the product. Sequence the complexity.


The core architectural decision was to meet each reader at their level of understanding rather than assuming. Non-technical buyers needed a reason to care before they could evaluate features. Technical users needed a clear path to specifics without wading through introductory material.


Organizing use cases by industry rather than feature was the hinge. Finance, supply chain, healthcare — buyers could immediately find themselves in the page.


Copy-first wireframes drove the process — establishing message hierarchy before layout meant the design team built into the content's logic rather than retrofitting copy into existing components.


CONDITIONS REDESIGNED

Hero: sequencing trust before action

The original hero led with features and a CTA simultaneously — asking users to act before giving them reason to. I restructured it around a single job: answer "why trust this?" before the scroll. Benefit-led headline, one customer quote, logo strip, one CTA. Visual attention is finite. I treated it that way.

KEY IMPACT

25% increase in primary CTA clicks


KEY IMPACT

25% increase in primary CTA clicks


Before
After
UX Copy clarification

The content in the hero was trying to do too many things at once. So we had to clarify the value and we chose ot lead with benefit led messaging that matched the problem of the main persona: the overwhelmed user.

Tabbed navigation bundled the information architecture. 

Overview, features, pricing, and FAQ moved under one tabbed section. A direct path to sought-after information without requiring the reader to already know where to look.

Overview, features, pricing, and FAQ were surfaced as separate, equally weighted sections — forcing users to decide what mattered before they had enough context. In the mid-fidelity, we realized that the tabs took up too much real estate in the web experience, so we wanted to make sure that there was enough negative spacing so that the content could breathe better.


Before
After
Information Architecture redesign

Access to information was hard to find in the old format, so in order to make content more upfront, we added a tabular fuction at the top that directly led to the most sought out information on the product. Drag to compare — tabbed structure reduced navigation friction and made information findable without scrolling

Customer stories: surfaced, not buried

Stories had no visual prominence and no clear path to more. I moved social proof above the fold, made cards directly clickable, and added context markers — timestamps, video indicators — so users knew what they were committing to before engaging.


A compact hero with a benefit-led headline, logo strip, and a single direct customer quote answered "why trust this?" before the buyer had committed to reading.

KEY IMPACT

35% increase in customer story engagement with more visible stories and interactions

KEY IMPACT

35% increase in customer story engagement with more visible stories and interactions

Before
After
customer story redesign

In the old format, customer stories weren't linkable and it was hard to find the "see more customer stories tab". The focal point became the one story at the bottom. In the new format, you could click on the component directly and the see more customer stories button was more prominent on the right hand side. Drag to compare — customer validation moved above the fold, answering skepticism before it could form.

Industry-grouped use cases: making relevance findable

Use cases were a flat, ungrouped list. Users couldn't quickly answer "is this for someone like me?" I regrouped by vertical — finance, supply chain, healthcare — and introduced accordion flows so the scan happened at the industry level first, detail second. The interaction matched the actual mental model.


Use cases reorganized by industry with accordion flows. Sparse, generic use cases built out and organized by vertical — finance, supply chain, healthcare. Accordion UX let technical depth exist without overwhelming buyers who didn't need it.


KEY IMPACT

40% engagement increase with industry use case content

KEY IMPACT

40% engagement increase with industry use case content

Access to information was hard to find in the old format, so in order to make content more upfront, we added a tabular fuction at the top that directly led to the most sought out information on the product.

Before
After
Industry use case redesign

Information was sparse and not intuitive in the old format. With the new industry organization and accordion UX flows, information was simplified. Drag to compare — industry groupings let buyers find their context, accordion flows kept depth available without imposing it

The Tradeoffs

The page had an audience problem disguised as a content problem.


The decisions that shaped this project weren't obvious right answers — they were deliberate choices that solved for one thing by accepting a constraint somewhere else. Naming those honestly is part of understanding what the work actually was.

WHAT WE GAINED

Non-technical buyers could navigate without feeling lost

Industry-first organization gave buyers an immediate entry point. No translation required. Proof of relevance before proof of capability.

WHAT WE GAVE UP

Technical users had to click one level deeper for specifics

The accordion structure meant technical content was one interaction away rather than immediately visible. A minor friction worth accepting for the clarity it gave non-technical buyers.

WHAT WE GAINED

Non-technical buyers could navigate without feeling lost

Industry-first organization gave buyers an immediate entry point. No translation required. Proof of relevance before proof of capability.

WHAT WE GAINED

Non-technical buyers could navigate without feeling lost

Industry-first organization gave buyers an immediate entry point. No translation required. Proof of relevance before proof of capability.

WHAT WE GAVE UP

Technical users had to click one level deeper for specifics

The accordion structure meant technical content was one interaction away rather than immediately visible. A minor friction worth accepting for the clarity it gave non-technical buyers.

WHAT WE GAVE UP

Technical users had to click one level deeper for specifics

The accordion structure meant technical content was one interaction away rather than immediately visible. A minor friction worth accepting for the clarity it gave non-technical buyers.

WHAT WE GAINED

Proof arrived before skepticism could harden

Moving customer quotes and logos above the fold meant the most important trust signal hit at the right moment — not after the reader had already decided whether to stay.

WHAT WE GAVE UP

The hero section had less room for atmospheric brand storytelling

Surfacing proof early meant the hero was doing functional work rather than emotional work. A deliberate prioritization of trust over impression at the most critical moment.

THe SYSTEM VIEW

Legibility isn't a property of content. It's a property of the disguised as a content problem.


The three changes addressed different moments in different readers' journeys. Together they created a page that could be technical without being exclusionary, and accessible without being reductive. Neither audience had to wade through content meant for the other.


This is what sequencing complexity means. Not removing it — letting each reader arrive at it on their own terms, through a path that first established why it mattered to them specifically.

OUTCOME

+40%

+40%

STORY ENGAGEMENT

STORY ENGAGEMENT

Engagement with customer stories and use-case cards grew through industry-grouped navigation and inline links.

Engagement with customer stories and use-case cards grew through industry-grouped navigation and inline links.

+35%

FASTER PROOF DISCOVERY

Buyers found customer proof 35% faster after surfacing it above the fold instead of burying it mid-page.

+35%

+35%

FASTER PROOF DISCOVERY

FASTER PROOF DISCOVERY

Buyers found customer proof 35% faster after surfacing it above the fold instead of burying it mid-page.

Buyers found customer proof 35% faster after surfacing it above the fold instead of burying it mid-page.

+25%

+25%

CTA CLICK LIFT

CTA CLICK LIFT

Primary CTA clicks rose after rewriting the hero and headers to lead with outcomes instead of features.

Primary CTA clicks rose after rewriting the hero and headers to lead with outcomes instead of features.

WHAT THIS CONFIRMED


Complexity doesn't need to be removed. It needs to be earned — given to readers only after they've been given a reason to want it.


The instinct on technical products is almost always to simplify. This project taught me that's the wrong framing. The goal isn't simplicity — it's sequencing. Give people a reason to care first. Then give them the complexity they came for.


The synergy between writing and design was the other thing this project made tangible. A tabular structure that groups content by industry was a writing decision. A header that leads with outcome instead of feature was a design decision. Together, both created a better user experience.